新闻 国内 中原 生活 区县 佛教 娱乐 人物 经济 汽车 最新 范文 I T 女性 原创 头条 影音 健康
 家居 关注 文化 资料 保健 八卦 体育 星闻 报道 热点 快报 网络 娱乐 河南 焦点 美食 剧情 消息
首页 > 综合资讯2 > 论文
医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改
http://www.dhenan.com   来源:  2016-06-03 15:01:26

[关键词]医药论文英文摘要

1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要,英文摘要写得准确与否,很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平,也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授,年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕,为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作,可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本,对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评,以飨读者。2、编制体例:本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写;修改、插入处以黑体斜体,删节处附括号说明,如有点评附上标数字注明。1、原文:DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixuetingliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwater,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.ThesamplesweredeterminatedbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Result:Theaveragerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid修正:DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxuetingoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedindistilledwater,andthenextracted(intothesample删去)withwater-saturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.ThesamplesweresubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,(and删去)RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3(five删去)batchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandfeasible.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;ChuxuetingoralLiquids;Determination;Gallicacid点评:1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”,自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping,以方便国外读者理解。2、school可作“(大学里的)院”解,原意是“药学院”,而非“药理教研室”,故改之。3、斜体n表示“正”。
2、原文:

ContentDeterminationofEmodininQingreMingmuCapsules

LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProviceInstituteofDrugControl,

Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)

ABSTRACTObjectives:TodeterminationcontentofEmodininQingreMingm

uCapsules.Methods:Tlcswasused,silicagelTlcplate,developingso

lventwasBenzene-Ethylfermate-formicacid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1

:0.5)ofwhichtheuppersolutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm.Result:Thelinea

rrelationshipofsampleapplicationwhichrangedbetween0.168-3.09μg

wasgood.Theregressionequationwasbelow:Y=105417.7X-1115.6,r=0.9

995;areragerecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Conclusion:Thismethodi

ssimple,accurateandconvenient.

KEYWORDSTLcs;QingremingmuCcapsules;Emodin

修正:

DeterminationofEmodinContentinQingremingmu1Capsules

LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProvicialInstituteofDrugControl

,Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)

ABSTRACTObjective:Tosetupamethodforthedetermination(content删

去)ofEmodincontentinQingreMingmuCapsules.Methods:IntheTLCa

ssay,a0.5%canboxymethylcellulosesodium(wasused删去)silicagelG

plateandadevelopingsolventwithamixtureofbenzene—ethylformat

e—formicacid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)astheuppersolution

wereused.λS=435nm,λR=530nm.Results:Agoodlinearrelationshipwas

foundwhenthesampleamount(which删去)rangedbetween0.168-3.09μg

(wasgood删去).Theregressionequationwasasfollows:Y=105417.7X-1

115.6,r=0.9995.Theaveragerateofrecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Co

nclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandaccurate.

KEYWORDSTLC;QingreMingmuCcapsules;Emodin

点评:

1、中成药名用斜体书写,也可译作removingpathogenicheattoimproveacui

tyofvision。



3、原文:

ResearchonTheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsule

XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH

ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,TheThirdMedicalUn

iversity,ChengduCollegeofPLA610081,China)

ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveandtesttheacutetoxicityofHuningCa

psuleonKunmingmiceafterani.g.Methods:Countthedeathcasesofm

icein7daysafterthei.g.andworkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.R

esults:TheLD50ofHuningCapsuleonmiceis3981mg/kg.

KEYWORDSHuningCapsule;AcuteToxicity;LD50

修正:

AnExperimentalStudyoftheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsules1

XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH

ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,ChengduMilitaryMed

icalCollege,TheThirdMilitaryMedicalUniversity,Chengdu610081,Ch

ina)

ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveanddeterminetheacutetoxicityofHuni

ngcapsules(onKunmingmice删去)afterasingleintragastricadministr

ationinthemouse.Methods:50Kunmingmicewererandomlydividedinto

5equalgroups,with10animalsineachgroup.Asingledoseof7500,

5630,4200,3150and2360mg/kg-1ofthecontentofthecapsulesweread

ministenedthroughagastrictubetoeachofthemiceofthe5groups,

respectively.Thenumbersofthedeathsofthemicewithin7dayswere

noteddownandthemediarletherdose(LD50)ofHuningCapsuleswascal

culated.(Countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andwo

rkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.删去)Results:TheLD50ofHuningCa

psuleinmicewas3981mg/kg.Conclusion:HuningCapsuleshaveonlyami

noracutetoxicity.Itisthereforesafetousethedrugclinically.Fu

rtherstudyofitstoxicityinlong-termapplicationisrequired.

KEYWORDSHuningCapsules;Toxicity,acute;LD50

点评:

1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussiveandantiasthmaticcapsules.

责任编辑:msms

 热门新闻
版权所有:大河南网